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Wednesday, February 17, 2021

Book Review Article, J.M. Coetzee, THE MASTER OF PETERSBURG, A Novel

 





Book Review Article

J.M. Coetzee, The Master of Petersburg (Penguin Books, 1995, 250 pp.). First published in Great Britain in 1994.

Abbreviations used in this article: FM (Fyodor Mikhailovich [Dostoevsky], AG (Anna Grigorievna [Snitkina-Dostoevskaya], his wife), AS (Anna Sergeyevna, character in Coetzee’s novel), Master (The Master of Petersburg)

Note: Fyodor Mikhailovich Dostoevsky was born in 1821; the year 2021 marks the two-hundredth anniversary of his birth.

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Background

On April 12/26, 1867, Fyodor Dostoevsky and his new bride, Anna Grigorievna, left St. Petersburg by train for their European “vacation.” The trip was occasioned by their desperate need to get away from Dostoevsky’s creditors—who were a constant threat to send him to debtor’s prison or to confiscate all his worldly possessions—and from relatives whose presence was a threat to break up their marriage almost before it had begun.

AG (1846-1918), Dostoevsky’s almost child bride—he was in his mid-forties, she was barely out of her teens—became an immediate source of resentment for (1) Emilia Fyodorovna and her family; she was the wife of Dostoevsky’s dead brother Mikhail; he felt an obligation to lend her financial support and she felt entitled to that support; and (2) Pavel Isaev (Pasha—1847-1900), Dostoevsky’s scapegrace stepson by his first wife, Marya Dmitrievna—who died of TB in 1864.

We know little of Pasha’s life, and of course had he not been Dostoevsky’s stepson his name would have vanished altogether from history. What we do know of him, in relation to his stepfather, is almost all bad. He remained a thorn in Dostoevsky’s side for many years, the perpetual sponger. FM asked his friends for help in finding employment for Pasha. They did help, but the lazy Pasha, it seemed, could never hold a job. Even after he was a married man Pasha continued behaving irresponsibly, and as long as Dostoevsky was alive he went on sponging from him. As for AG, a girl only a year older than Pasha, he vehemently opposed his father’s marriage and did his best to make things difficult for her.

The European “vacation” ended up lasting four years and never felt remotely like a vacation. FM and AG were dependent for cash solely on what he could earn as a writer, so he was constantly trying to write fiction and soliciting advance funds from his publisher back in Russia. Living isolated from friends and relatives, in places where they did not speak the language, the couple was often forced to pawn personal items in order to survive. Perpetually cash-strapped, they never managed even such an ordinary thing as attending a musical concert or opera. Ever dissatisfied with lodgings or landlords or weather, they moved constantly across Europe, living at various times in Germany, Switzerland, Italy. At one point in Master Coetzee has his “FM” lonely in St. Petersburg, longing for “Dresden and the comfortable regularity of life there.” Not likely. Under such circumstances the real FM would have missed his wife and baby daughter, but not Dresden. His letters of the time make repeated reference to how much he hates the Germans.

Their precarious situation abroad was complicated by Dostoevsky’s epileptic seizures and by his mania for gambling. Although whatever money they had was meagre, he frequently lost at the roulette tables. Then he would come crawling back to AG, begging on his knees for forgiveness and asking her to pawn personal items, so that he could go back to the tables and lose more money. He had a system for winning big, so he told her, and if he could only remain calm while playing, his system would work. He never could remain calm. Meanwhile, back in Russia, sister-in-law Emilia Fyorodovna and sponger stepson Pasha went on demanding financial support. Feeling guilty that he did not help them enough, FM did his best to get them cash when he could. In a letter to his friend Apollon Maikov he explained, “In Pasha’s case, he was entrusted to my care by poor Marya Dmitrievna on her deathbed. So how can I abandon him altogether? He is like a son to me . . . If I leave an impression of goodness and kindness on his heart now, it will stand him in good stead as he matures.”

You would think that life under these near intolerable conditions would preclude starting a family, but no, AG gave birth to two children while living abroad and was pregnant with another when they finally returned to Russia in 1871. Sofya (Sonya) was born in Geneva on March 5, 1868. It was FM’s first natural child, and the middle-aged author doted on her. His grief knew no bounds when she died of pneumonia on May 12. He “sobbed and wept like a woman [wrote AG], standing in front of the body of his darling as it grew cold, and covering her tiny white face and hands with burning kisses. I never again saw such paroxysms of grief.” Lyubov (Lyuba) was born in Dresden on September 26, 1869; she lived into adulthood, dying in Italy in 1926. Lyubov published an account of her father’s life that reeks with fictional episodes of her own making; she also tried writing fiction. Plagued by various physical and emotional ailments, she in fact seems to have grown up to be something of an “infernal, Dostoevskian” woman.

Under these trying conditions FM doggedly went on writing. While abroad he published the novel The Idiot and the long story “The Eternal Husband,” and he made a start on another long novel, The Devils (sometimes translated as The Possessed), which he completed only after his return to Russia.

                                                                   A.G. Dostoevskaya







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In his novel on Dostoevsky, J.M. Coetzee changes a few facts at the start. In Coetzee’s fiction the scapegrace Pasha dies, by murder or suicide, in the fall of 1869. The real FM at that time was back in Dresden, furiously working on “The Eternal Husband” (Sept.-Dec., 1869), but Coetzee’s “FM” arrives in St. Petersburg (October, 1869), grieving mightily over Pasha—never called Pasha in this novel, but always Pavel—and determined not only to investigate his death, but also to create some sort of mystical communion with him: to take Pavel’s death upon himself and make it at one with his own death (more on this below). Pavel, it seems (in Coetzee’s fiction), had been a member of Sergei Nechaev’s terrorist group, and the notorious Nechaev himself appears in Master and confronts “FM.”

In October of 1869 the newborn Lyubov was hardly a month old, and one seriously doubts that FM would have left AG alone to cope with their baby—eking out a penurious and lonely life in Dresden—but  never mind. Another serious improbability concocted by Coetzee is that, hoping to avoid contact with his creditors, Dostoevsky travels back to Russia on a false passport, that of Pavel’s dead father, Aleksandr Isaev. In the first place, you doubt that he would have in his possession a valid passport for Isaev, who died in Siberia in August, 1855.

In the second place, travelling on a false passport could have created enormous problems for FM, had he been caught doing so. We know now that Tsarist secret police had already given orders that he be thoroughly searched and that his papers be confiscated upon his crossing the Russian border. Why? Because he had unwisely been on friendly terms with N.P. Ogarev in Geneva, and Ogarev was a confederate of Herzen and Bakunin—a revolutionary firebrand who had personal connections with one of the most dangerous revolutionaries around, Sergei Nechaev. When FM and AG finally returned to Russia in July, 1871, they fully expected to be searched and to have documents confiscated by the secret police. They were, in fact, held up in customs, but the shrieks of baby daughter Lyuba, who was hungry, got on the nerves of the customs agents, and they waved the family on through. Coetzee not only has FM travelling on a fake passport; he also writes a scene in which FM admits the deception to a police official who is interviewing him. Not likely.

“FM” the Fabricator

Any writer of novels is a fabricator of fictions, and that, of course, is a central point in Master. Coetzee’s FM is blocked as a writer throughout the whole novel; the climax of the book comes when he suddenly sits down—very close to the end—and begins writing. But from the very beginning he is, in effect, writing himself, concocting his role as bereaved father. Early in the story Anna Sergeyevna, the landlady where the dead Pavel had roomed—and where FM will room for the duration of the story—mentions that she had lost a child in infancy. “An infant’s death is easier to bear,” she remarks, and this would have set off bells and whistles in the head of the real FM, so recently bereaved of his infant daughter Sonya. But that has no bearing for Coetzee’s “FM,” since Sonya does not exist; she is never mentioned in Master.

Even if we as readers had no inkling of what the real Pasha Isaev was like, we would get the message, reinforced as the book goes on: “FM” is not really grieving over his dead stepson. He is playing the role of the proper griever and trying to sell himself on the grief. He puts his nose to Pavel’s pillow, presses his forehead to the white suit he left behind and “the smell of his son comes to him.” Much is made of scenes like this, but we consistently doubt the sincerity of FM’s grief. Going out to visit Pavel’s burial place with AS and her daughter Matryona, he puts on a show for them, throwing himself on the mound over the grave and rubbing his face in the wet earth. When he gets up he thinks, “What a Jewish performance! But let her see! Let her see one is not made of stone! Let her see there are no bounds!” This is the one allusion in the novel to FM’s anti-Semitism, which was always at the forefront of his personality.

But would the real FM put on such a “Jewish” performance? Quite possibly. If you read about Dostoevsky’s life—or read the hysterical scenes in so many of his fictions—you get the feeling that he not only indulges himself in melodrama, as do his characters, but also takes a kind of voluptuous pleasure, as do they, in the performance. Much later in the novel we come upon this passage: “He shakes his head as if to rid it of a plague of devils. What is it that is corrupting the integrity of his grieving, that insists it is nothing but a lugubrious disguise?” So it is a disguise, his wallow in bereavement, but why does he need this disguise? In order, apparently, to enable him to play lots of other mind games with himself.

                                                      Lyubov Dostoevskaya as A Child



Liminality

“He has been tugged out of human time.” His stepson’s death has propelled FM into a different dimension. “Since the news came of his son’s death, something has been ebbing out of him that he thinks of as firmness. I am the one who is dead, he thinks; or rather, I died but my death failed to arrive. His sense of his own body is that it is strong, sturdy, that it will not yield of its own accord. His chest is like a barrel with sound staves. His heart will go on beating for a long time. The stream that carries him still moves forward, still has direction, even purpose; but that purpose is no longer life. He is being carried by dead water, a dead stream.”

Thirty pages on another assertion: “This is not grief. This is death, death coming before its time, come not to overwhelm him and devour him but simply to be with him. It is like a dog that has taken up residence with him, a big grey dog, blind and deaf and stupid and immovable. When he sleeps the dog sleeps, when he wakes the dog wakes, when he leaves the house, the dog shambles behind him.”

This idea of your death coming in advance, then backing off but remaining somehow a cogent presence for the rest of your life suggests Dostoevsky’s experience with almost being executed by firing squad in 1849—an episode not treated in Coetzee’s novel—after he was caught up in the activities of the Petrashevsky Circle. The conspirators were to be shot three at a time, and the first three were already tied blindfolded to poles when the execution—planned as fake from the start—was called off. Dostoevsky was in the second grouping of three, and the experience left deep scars in his psyche.  

FM’s death walked right up to him that day, then backed off, but when it comes that close you cannot push it away altogether; it’s there waiting for you. FM rehashed the whole experience fictionally in his novel The Idiot, which appears, however, to have little or no relevance to Coetzee’s Master. Similar thoughts arise in the head of Victor Hugo’s protagonist in his “Last Day of a Condemned Man,” a work familiar to Dostoevsky, and in Maurice Blanchot’s The Instant of My Death, in which he asserts that in near-death (near-execution) experiences “your death stays with you.” You, in effect, live the rest of your life in limbo, not exactly dead, but not alive either, in a kind of half death. A zombie.

The liminality is also suggested by the leitmotif of falling, which recurs throughout the novel. Pavel’s death results from a fall from a tower, and FM imagines “the last fraction of the last instant of his fall,” when “Pavel knew that nothing could save him, that he was dead.” He would like to believe that during that liminal moment his stepson’s mind had “etherized itself against whatever is too enormous to be borne,” but he must admit to himself that “Pavel, falling, knew everything.”

Later the terrorist Nechaev—most likely the one responsible for Pavel’s death—takes FM on a climb up that same tower. FM looks down at the space through which his stepson fell. “He grips the railing, stares down there into the plummeting darkness. Between here and there an eternity of time, so much time that it is impossible for the mind to grasp it. Between here and there Pavel was alive, more alive than ever before. We live most intensely while we are falling—a truth that wrings the heart.” The liminal moment, the time between when the headsman puts the guillotine blade in motion and the guillotine chops off your head, is the moment when you are living your life with total intensity. The plot of Coetzee’s novel is much complicated by our knowledge that roughly a year before he wrote Master, Coetzee’s own son died from a fall at age 23. Were we unaware of that biographical fact we would read the novel in a different way.

As mentioned above, “FM”’s grief over his dead stepson often appears insincere, an act he performs for others and for his very self. But there are passages where the grief seems intense and genuine. Such is a long passage (p. 53-54), which I quote in part: “Not oblivion, but the moment before oblivion [again here, the liminal moment], when I come panting up to you at the rim of the well and we look upon each other for a last time, knowing we are alive, sharing this one life, our only life. All that I am left to grasp for: the moment of that gaze, salutation and farewell in one, past all arguing, past all pleading: Hello, old friend. Goodbye, old friend. Dry eyes. Tears turned to crystals.

“I hold your head between my hands. I kiss your brow. I kiss your lips.” This passage, teeming with love and grief, goes on for three more paragraphs. I get the feeling here that it is the author Coetzee experiencing these feelings and writing these lines, not his character “FM.” The feelings seem too genuine for the conflicted FM of this book, who never loved his stepson deeply. Nor did the real FM; simple fact: stepsons seldom are loved with the intense love one feels for sons. Coetzee, who gets lots of things about Dostoevsky wrong, gets that one right.

Epilepsy

At one point FM thinks that Pavel was fortunate not to be “born of me.” The implication is that he might have inherited his father’s epilepsy, and this is a telling detail for those who know something of Dostoevsky’s life. His son Aleksei (Alyosha), born August 10, 1875, died of an epileptic seizure in 1878. The leitmotif of epilepsy in Master is congruent with the leitmotif of falling. Throughout the novel Dostoevsky is described frequently as anticipating a seizure; twice he has seizures. At an early point in the action he has “a vision of Pavel smiling at him, at his peevishness, his tears, his histrionics . . . the smile is not of derision but on the contrary of friendliness and forgiveness. He knows! he thinks: He knows and does not mind! [knows what? we may ask; probably that his stepfather’s grief-stricken pose is an act—URB]. A wave of gratitude and joy and love passes over him. Now there is sure to be a fit!”

Later there is a description of the aura that precedes the seizure. Falling asleep in the room he has taken from AS, Pavel’s old room, “He awakes full of surprise. Though it is still dark, he feels as if he had rested enough for seven nights. He is fresh and invincible; the very tissues of his brain seem washed clean. He can barely contain himself. He is like a child at Easter, on fire for the household to wake up so that he can share his joy with them.” He imagines waking AS and Matryona and dancing with them about the apartment, then taking on “the fourth one” (Pavel) as well to join in the dance. “Joy breaking like a dawn! But only for an instant. It is not merely that clouds begin to cross this new, radiant sky. It is as if, at the moment when the sun comes forth in its glory, another sun appears too, a shadow sun, an anti-sun sliding across its face. The word omen crosses his mind in all its dark, ominous weight. The dawning sun is there not for itself but to undergo eclipse; joy shines out only to reveal what the annihilation of joy will be like.”

Soon after this he staggers out onto the stairwell and has a seizure. When he returns to consciousness, “It is as if he has been born a minute ago, born into a world of unrelieved night . . . “A body falls vertically through space inside him. He is that body.” He bemoans his own condition: “Why am I accursed? he cries out within himself.” There seems to be nothing compensatory for the fits: “Nor do the trances themselves provide illumination. They are not visitations. Far from it they are nothing—mouthfuls of his life sucked out of him as if by a whirlwind that leaves behind not even a memory of darkness.”

Much later in the novel “In spells of dizziness and palpitations of the heart, in exhaustion and irritability, a fit has been announcing itself for days without arriving. Unless the entire state in which he lives can be called a fit.” Near the end of the book there is a scene in which the liminal moment of epilepsy is linked to an insight into the all-pervasiveness of evil, even in a child. FM is conversing with Matryona, who for a brief second gives him a “shameless and derisive” look.

“It is impossible that what he has just seen has truly taken place. What he has seen comes not from the world he knows, but from another existence. It is as though for the first time he has been present and conscious during a seizure; so that for the first time his eyes have been open to where he is when he is seized. In fact, he must wonder whether seizure is any longer the right word, whether the word has not all along been possession—whether everything that for the past twenty years has gone under the name of seizure has not been a mere presentiment of what is now happening, the quaking and dancing of the body a long-drawn-out prelude to a quaking of the soul.”

A telling point in Master. The seizures of FM over a lifetime are—so we are told—a prelude to what is happening to him over the course of the book’s action: his progression toward the point where he approaches total madness and is possessed totally by devils. In a book whose title might be better borrowed from Dostoevsky himself—The Devils—Coetzee brings his fictional “FM” closer and closer as the action progresses to a state of demonic possession. More on this later. For now, suffice it to say that his descriptions of FM’s seizures, and especially of the aura preceding them, fail to describe, or prefer not to describe what the real FM experienced. In his own descriptions of the seizures, and in his fiction—he gives the experience to his character, the epileptic Prince Myshkin in The Idiot—Dostoevsky ascribes mystical enlightenment to the aura.

“Dostoevsky himself had felt, as Myshkin does in the ‘aura’ preceding the onset of a fit, the supernatural illumination of a realm embodying ‘the acme of harmony and beauty,’ which aroused in him ‘a feeling, unknown and undivined until then, of completeness, of proportion, of reconciliation, and of ecstatic devotional merging in the highest synthesis of life.’ . . . Dostoevsky had also ‘actually said to himself at that second that, for the infinite happiness he had felt in it, that second might be worth the whole of life.’ It was not only the fictional Myshkin who could affirm, in words taken from the Book of Revelation, that ‘at that moment I seem somehow to understand the extraordinary saying that there shall be no more time.’” Here we have more liminality. And a brief connection with Ultimate Reality. Quotation above is from Joseph Frank. Dostoevsky: The Miraculous Years, 1865-1871, p. 313-14. For more discussion of the “supernatural plenitude” of the aura, see the same book, p. 316. For an idea of what a hideous burden the disease was on FM, see the footnote on p. 410.

The Political Theme

Although the plot of Master concerns itself largely with the inner workings of Dostoevsky’s mind and psyche, there is an overt subplot. It involves the terrorist Sergei Nechaev (1847-1882) and revolves around the timeworn theme of fathers and sons. While living abroad and formulating his ideas for what was to be his novel The Devils—the Dostoevsky novel that has greatest relevance to Coetzee’s book—FM constantly read the Russian newspapers and followed developments in the “Nechaev affair.” His character Peter Verkhovensky in The Devils is an unprincipled, vicious nihilist based on Nechaev.

Nechaev fled Russia and went abroad in 1869, after being implicated in the murder (Nov. 26, 1869) of a student named Ivanov, who was apparently a member of his own small revolutionary group. Why exactly he was murdered has not been established, but possibly Nechaev needed a murder to bind together more cohesively the others in the group. In Master Nechaev tells FM at one point: “If you do not kill you are not taken seriously.” Ivanov may have also had objections to some of Nechaev’s policies. In Master Coetzee plays on the name Ivanov, giving it to a minor character, a police spy and derelict—something of a Marmeladov type from Crime and Punishment—who interacts with FM and is later murdered. One of the chapters in the novel is also titled “Ivanov,” and it is worth mentioning that Nechaev came originally from the city of Ivanovo. The maiden name of FM’s mother was Nechaev.

In Master Coetzee imagines that Nechaev has returned incognito to Russia from abroad and is in St. Petersburg to foment dissent among the students and, eventually, incite a peasant revolution. There are several scenes in which he interacts with FM, playing cat and mouse games with him. Pavel, it seems, had been a member of Nechaev’s small revolutionary circle in Petersburg, and his fictional murder is analogous to the murder of the real Ivanov. Nechaev has an illegal printing press and wants FM to write something condemning the police for Pavel’s murder—an accusation to be distributed to the volatile students and the people.

We are kept in the dark about the circumstances of Pavel’s death for much of the novel. It may have been—so we are told—a suicide or the work of the police. But late in the action we are provided the most logical scenario: Nechaev has murdered Pavel as a way of drawing FM back to Petersburg, where he hopes to use the author of Crime and Punishment in aid of his revolutionary plans. As FM tells himself, “Pavel’s death was merely the bait to lure him from Dresden to Petersburg. He has been the quarry all the time.”

Fathers and Sons

The theme of conflict between the generations is big in Master, just as it is in Dostoevsky’s Devils, where FM takes off from the Turgenev novel Fathers and Children and establishes the relevance of the issue for a later generation. In discussing “the Nechaev phenomenon” the police official Maximov in Master remarks, “Perhaps it is just the old matter of fathers and sons after all, such as we have always had, only deadlier in this particular generation.” At times Coetzee implies that the death of a son is always something of a triumph for the father, who by outliving his offspring has won the age-old battle. Pavel’s behavior after FM’s marriage to AG, a young woman close to the age of his stepson, appears based partly on sexual jealousy. At the end of Chapter Nine Pavel is described as “obstinately not accepting that she, AG, would henceforth share his father’s bed.” This reverses the usual paradigm, in which “fathers envy their sons their women.”

Coetzee even pushes the issue back to the previous generation, at one point speculating on Nechaev’s relationship with his father. In taunting FM, Nechaev tells him, “I know about your own father, Pavel Isaev told me—what a petty tyrant he was, how everyone hated him, till his own peasants killed him.” This myth, by the way—that Dostoevsky’s father was murdered by peasants on his estate—has now been put to rest, but quite possibly FM himself believed it. The theme of fathers and children pervades the text of the whole book. At one point FM recalls a fellow-convict in Siberia “who had violated his twelve-year-old daughter and then strangled her. He had been found after the event sitting by the side of a duckpond with the lifeless body in his arms. He had yielded without a struggle, insisting only on carrying the dead child home himself and laying her out on a table—doing all of this with, it was reported, the greatest tenderness.” This episode is summed up as “Murderous tenderness, tender murderousness.” Another good title for Coetzee’s novel.

One of the major themes treated in Master is the deviltry of revolutionary aspirations. Devilish ideas are passed from one revolutionary to another. FM tells Maximov that “there has entered a spirit” into Nechaev. There is nothing remarkable about the spirit. It is a dull, resentful and murderous spirit . . . It despises ideas, it is outside ideas, and Nechaev himself is not its embodiment but its host; or rather, he is under possession by it.” Maximov prefers to see Nechaev as “possessed by a demon.” At a different point Nechaev is described as “the Mongol left behind in the Russian soul,” which reminds me of portraits of Vladimir Lenin, with the obvious Tatar blood that stands out in his visage.

Of course, Nechaev’s ideals at their base are commendable; they are the ideals of practically all left-wing revolutionaries: razing pernicious capitalism, giving food, clothing and housing to the poor; re-educating the intelligentsia: “Everyone will go to school again, even the professors. The peasants will be the teachers and the professors will be the students. In our schools we will make new men and new women. Everyone will be reborn with a new heart.”

Sounds easy, but it never is. Remaking human hearts. And that re-education project has ominous overtones; it anticipates what was tried in the twentieth century, in the Soviet Union, China, Vietnam, Laos—resulting in hideous brutality and repression of the innocent, including mass torture and murder. As for the fathers and sons theme of this book, Coetzee emphasizes that the sons take the innocuous-looking but potentially murderous ideas from the fathers. How did we get to Lenin and the Russian Revolution in 1917? It did not begin overnight. It began with certain philosophical and political ideas that came out of Western Europe and were embraced, developed by Russian radicals: Belinksy, Pisarev, Chernyshevksy, Bakunin, and many more, including Dostoevsky.

Nechaev in a way is the son of FM; he has read Crime and Punishment and tells Dostoevsky that the novel inspired him. Nechaev the nihilist is also, in part, a creation of the Petrashevsky dreamers of 1849, who included Dostoevsky himself. Although he kept this a secret for the whole of his life, it has now been established that FM was a member of a secret revolutionary sub-circle of the Petrashevsky-ites, led by the dire Speshnev, who some see as the prototype of the sinister Stavrogin in The Devils. Had the tsarist authorities discovered the existence of this small circle of men bent on fomenting violent revolution, Dostoevsky may well have been executed in 1849, rather than being put through a mock execution.

By the time we come to the action of Coetzee’s novel, FM has long been disabused of his early revolutionary aspirations inspired by French Utopian Socialism. After his sojourn in the labor camps of Siberia such ideas seemed dangerously naïve to him. His novel The Devils, not yet written in 1869, when Master is set, but already percolating in his mind, is a vehement attack on Nihilism and all its sisters. In fact, a serious reading of Dostoevsky’s major novels, beginning with Notes from the Underground and concluding with The Brothers Karamazov, reveals that Dostoevsky, in words, has already torn down the edifice of communism before it was ever built. They built it anyway, first in Russia, then in various other countries worldwide. Only now, in the twenty-first century, has that sorry edifice fallen into almost total disrepair. Of course, there are still a few builders of the edifices of Utopia out there today, people who have not learned the lesson they should long since have learned: that human nature is such that when you build utopian castles they never stand tall, and millions of innocent people will die.





The “FM” of The Master of Petersburg: A Pedophiliac

Coetzee’s novel has little development of plot. The political subplot involving Nechaev is secondary to what is going with “FM” in 1869. That’s where the real plot lies: in the mind and psyche of “FM.” From the very first pages Coetzee’s “Dostoevsky” is portrayed in ways that present him as much more negative than positive. On the first page he is described as “a man in late middle age, bearded and stooped.” He is, by the way, only forty-eight, but 48 was a lot older in the nineteenth century, and Dostoevsky’s more than excruciating life wore him out early. He ended up living only sixty years and was showing signs of deep old age at the time of his death in 1881.

“FM” comes to see the apartment where his dead stepson had lived, talks to the landlady there, Anna Sergeyevna. He asks to take his stepson’s room for the month of October and November, pays for the room. AS agrees, but reluctantly. “She does not want this mournful man in her home, casting darkness all about him.”

Ten pages later he imagines the impression he must be making on the child, Matryona. “This blackness of mine, this beardedness, this boniness, must be as repugnant as death the reaper himself. Death, with his bony hips and his inch-long teeth and the rattle of his ankles as he walks.” The FM of this novel is a creature in dire distress; in fact, that is largely what the novel is about. Early on (p. 19) he thinks, “From somewhere to somewhere I am in retreat; when the retreat is completed, what will be left of me? . . . Since the news came of his son’s death, something has been ebbing out of him that he thinks of as firmness. I am the one who is dead, he thinks; or rather, I died, but my death failed to arrive.”

So it goes. In Master we are presented with a “Dostoevsky” who takes the death of his stepson upon himself and feels already half dead, a kind of ghost who drifts through the action of the novel. “FM” is more than a little bit mad, a blocked writer who fears what will emerge if he begins writing. “But the writing, he fears, would be that of a madman—vileness, obscenity, page after page of it, untamable. He thinks of the madness as running through the artery of his right arm down to the fingertips and the pen and so to the page. It runs in a stream; he need not dip the pen, not once. What flows on to the paper is neither blood nor ink but an acrid black, with an unpleasing green sheen when the light glances off it.”

This description, once again, comes early in the novel, page 18, but the intense dreariness that it embodies is a hallmark of the book as a whole. Coetzee is a writer not given to humor. His style in this book about FM is utterly un-dostoevskian. The tale is told in calm, laconic language, not at all in keeping with Dostoevsky’s wild melodrama—not only in his fictional works, but also in his life. Those who have not read FM may have a view of him and his fictions that is totally sober and dark. Not so for the real FM. He had a wicked, frenetic sense of humor—true a very dark humor. But his books are far from dreary.

In Master there is a constant emphasis on lack of control: “FM” is not in control of himself. He rashly begins an affair with AS, and after their first coupling “he feels like a leaf or a seed in the grip of a headlong force, a winged seed drawn up into the highest windstream, carried dizzily above the oceans.” The sick “Dostoevsky” of this book is “a man in thrall to a spirit of petty evil.” In this respect he much resembles the terrorist and Nihilist Nechaev, but Nechaev’s evil is inspired by politics. “FM”’s evil has its origins in perversion of human sexuality. Coetzee’s book teems with the subject of pedophilia; in fact, pedophilia is the major theme of the whole novel.

In Dostoevsky’s novel The Devils, a novel intent, largely, on decimating all ideals of left-wing political revolutionaries, a subtheme involves one of the author’s lifelong preoccupations: sexual perversion, and, in particular, pedophilia. One of the chapters of Devils, titled “At Tikhon’s,” never made it into the final published version of the novel, but it has particular relevance for Coetzee’s novel. Dostoevsky’s publisher refused to print that chapter, and all of the writer’s confederates and friends advised against printing it. The chapter describes how the main protagonist of the novel, Stavrogin, rapes a little girl, Matryona (Matryosha) in a bathhouse. Coetzee gives the name of the girl to the little girl of his novel, and his final chapter is titled “Stavrogin.”

At one point in Master “FM” takes perverse pleasure in “rubbing little Matryosha’s face” in the words of a squalid story that he tells her. The story—involved with the image of Pavel’s white suit so important in the text—is told twice. Pavel is the hero of this story, which relates his kindness to a crippled girl, not of sound mind. Reacting to the way people have abused the girl, Pavel buys a white suit and goes to her as a suitor. He treats her with relentless solicitude. The second time, much later in the novel, “FM” reveals that Pavel’s behavior was far from commendable. Rather, he enjoyed tormenting the girl, pretending to be her suitor. The whole thing was a cruel joke.

Such subject matter is common in Dostoevsky’s works. Just one example: in Crime and Punishment the more than weird “hero” Raskolnikov takes up with a crippled girl, pretends he loves her and wants to marry her, but his motivation is far from pure. In Master “FM” takes the subject matter, and real names of the characters, Maria Lebyadkina and her brother, Captain Lebyadkin, from his Devils—not yet written in 1869, but never mind. In Devils the perverse Stavrogin goes so far as to marry the crippled and retarded girl, one of the many things that he does for a good laugh.

In telling Matryosha the story of the white suit, “FM” behaves just as the most perverse characters in his own novels. He even goes so far as to suggest to her that there is no God. “Pavel asked God to save him. God said no.” Here we are into some very sick stuff. “FM” metaphorically violates little Matryosha, and in so doing, “He thinks of child prostitutes he has known, here and in Germany; he thinks of men who search out such girls because beneath the garish paint and provocative clothes they detect something that outrages them, a certain inviolability, a certain maidenliness. She is prostituting the Virgin, such a man says, recognizing the flavour of innocence in the gesture with which the girl cups her breasts for him, in the movement with which she spreads her thighs . . . Deliberately, with teeth clenched, he hurts her, and then hurts her again and again, watching her face all the time for something that goes beyond mere wincing, mere bearing of pain: for the sudden wide-eyed look of a creature that begins to understand its life is in danger.”

Immediately after this hideous passage “The vision, the fit, the rictus of the imagination, passes. He soothes her a last time, withdraws his arm, finds a way of being with her as he was before.” This is to suggest that the immersion of “FM” in perversity is somehow akin to what happens to him during an epileptic seizure: he departs from his usual self and enters a different dimension.

At another point in the novel “FM” imagines writing a pornographic book in French—stepping, in effect, into the territory of the Marquis de Sade. Titled Memoirs of a Russian Nobleman, it would be “a book of the night, in which every excess would be represented and no bounds respected . . . With a chapter in which the noble memoirist reads aloud to the young daughter of his mistress a story of the seduction of a young girl in which he himself emerges more and more clearly as having been the seducer.”

Nechaev, says “FM,” “wants to live in a body at the limits of sensation, at the limits of bodily knowledge. That is why he can say everything is permitted . . .” Here he is speaking, as well, of himself. He thinks, And you? Are you so different? Those italicized words above, everything is permitted, are a quotation from The Brothers Karamazov.

The stylistic trick of Coetzee’s book seems to be this: as the action progresses the devils come more and more powerfully to inhabit the mind and psyche of “FM,” just as he comes closer to the point when he will begin writing his novel The Devils. Nechaev is described as demon-possessed; as for “FM,” “he has lost his way,” and “the only voices he hears now are devil-voices.” That’s on page 126, but consider this a hundred pages later: the writer feels a presence in the room, and “It is that of a thousand petty demons swarming in the air like locusts.”

“FM” is a writer, and as such, he can ostensibly “turn the falling into a flying.” Use fiction to build new worlds, overcoming somehow even death. But he has made “his own sordid and contemptible infirmity into the emblematic sickness of the age. The madness is in him and he is in the madness.” The title of the final chapter, “Stavrogin,” suggests that “FM” has now become his own sordid character. Here we reach the climax of the novel, when the writer—blocked up to this point—sits down to write: “He unpacks the writing case, sets out his materials.”

His writing, he knows, is a betrayal of all his loved ones: “Perversion: everything and everyone to be turned to another use, to be gripped to him and fall with him.” The kind of book he writes: “I write perversions of the truth. I choose the crooked road and take children into dark places.” As he sits trying to write, a phantom figure, a kind of double, sits opposite him, a figure “with the cold and massive indifference of stone.” I assume that this could be the devil himself on a brief visit, as he visits Ivan Karamazov in Dostoevsky’s final novel. Or, more likely, it is his own character, the embodiment of evil, Stavrogin. When “the pen begins to move” what is he writing? The infamous bathhouse scene, “At Tikhon’s,” the chapter too hot to handle, the one that never made it all the way into The Devils.

Then, somehow, that scene does not come off, and “FM” imagines himself as young again, like Pavel, and writing in the empty pages of Pavel’s diary. He titles the first effort, “The Apartment,” and the second “The Child.” What comes out on the page? More perversity. The young Pavel he invents takes pleasure in making love to a young woman he brings back to the apartment, when he knows that a little girl like Matryona is watching. He remembers Svidrigailov [pervert-pedophile character in Crime and Punishment, who ends up committing suicide]: “Women like to be humiliated.” In the second story, “The Child,” he recalls the story he had told Matryona earlier—how Pavel had shown kindness to Maria Lebyadkin in Tver, plagiarizing himself in part from The Devils—and reveals that Pavel’s kindness had really been mockery.

FM leaves the two pages open on the table for Matryona to read. This, he knows, is “an assault upon the innocence of a child.” It also is a way of “trapping God, forcing God to speak.” As if to say, Are you out there anywhere, God? If you are you surely will not allow me to get away with such a despicable business. God, as usual, has nothing to say, but in the ending of The Master of St. Petersburg there is an implication that “FM” has gone as far beyond the pale as possible. Like his own most perverse characters, Stavrogin and Svidrigailov—whom he has become—he will now take the most logical next step: suicide. If we assume that that is how Coetzee’s novel ends, the implication is that FM would die in 1869 and some of his most important works would never be written: including The Devils and The Brothers Karamazov.

The Muddle

In order to arrive at the final chapter, where it appears that “FM” has become a kind of Stavrogin, on the verge of suicide, we must muddle through some improbable action and a plethora of talk. The talk—between interlocutors “FM” and AS, or “FM” and “Nechaev”—is sometimes so excessive that it impedes the action of the novel.

Then there are themes that never quite ring true for me. One of these involves the idea that the father “FM” can somehow bring his dead stepson back by taking his place, being dead in place of him: “I am he and he is me.” This amounts to a kind of fiction writing, abrogating an act from the past (Pavel’s death) by taking on his role in a fiction: “let me be the thinking animal plunging through the air.” In the same vein are passages such as this: “Pavel is above all lonely, and in his loneliness needs to be sung to and comforted, to be reassured that he will not be abandoned at the bottom of the waters.”

Perhaps this unique approach to grieving would work better for me if Dostoevsky had ever touched upon it in his works and life. As it is, I see this as a part of the novel that makes more sense if we ascribe such feelings to Coetzee himself, faced with the death by falling of his own son.

Another problem in the novel is presented by the character of the landlady, Anna Sergeyevna. She is the love interest of the story, but an improbable one. “FM” comes to Petersburg, leaving behind in Dresden his young wife Anna and newborn daughter. Then he immediately begins an affair with this other Anna, who, surprisingly, goes along with him. This despite her being immediately put off by his dark and dire person, and by her sensing that perhaps he is using her—shades of Humbert Humbert in Lolita—to get to her nine-year-old daughter. The matter is further complicated when AS accuses FM of using sex with her to achieve a kind of communion with his dead son. The idea being, I presume, that sexual intercourse, like epilepsy, affords a brief glimpse into a different dimension.

“FM” himself later affirms that this is exactly what he has been trying to do: “She will bring him back. She is a conductress of souls.” And later, “I was sure you would conduct me to Pavel.” At this point the down-to-earth AS must be shaking her head. The imagery of conductress or guide through the Land of the Dead suggests the psychopomp, of whom the most well-known in Russian Orthodoxy is the icon of the Smolensk Hodegetria, painted in 1482 by the master Dionysius and at present in the collection of the Tretyakov Gallery in Moscow. Hodegetria means “guide” or “conductress” in Greek. Dostoevsky would have known that icon well. Don’t know, however, if Coetzee did. At any rate, this passage in Master strikes me as bizarre. Very late in the novel AS asks FM, “Are you still planning to leave?” You get the feeling that in her heart the question is more like, “Will you ever get lost and leave us alone?”

More rather nonsensical talk near the end of the book. A conversation between AS and FM. “FM: Let me only say, over the past week I have come to realize how much fidelity means to us, to both of us. We have had to recover our fidelity. I am right, am I not? [reader’s reaction here: Duh. What is he talking about?]

“He examines her keenly; but she is waiting for him to say more, waiting to be sure what fidelity means.

FM: I mean, on your side, fidelity to your daughter. And on my side, fidelity to my son. We cannot love until we have their blessing. [reader’s question: what about fidelity to your wife and baby daughter back in Dresden?] Am I right?

“Though he knows she agrees, she will not yet say the word. Against that soft resistance he presses on.

FM: I would like to have a child with you. [reader’s reaction: Huh?!]

“She colours. ‘What nonsense! You have a wife and child already!’

FM: They are of a different family. You are of Pavel’s family, you and Matryona, both of you. I am of Pavel’s family too.

AS: I don’t know what you mean.

Reader: I don’t either, but I know that this scene has taken us beyond the bounds of the bizarre. Especially in the second half of the novel, there are pages pervaded with the nonsensical or the weird. One definition of the word “rhetoric” is that of empty words uttered for their own sake but having no concrete meaning. Just a lot of babble. There are full pages of Coetzee’s book that are rhetoric in that sense.

Does A Writer of Fiction Have Obligations To the Real Fiction Writer He Depicts?

In two separate places “FM” steps aside from the action and imagines himself as a character in a book. “If I were a character in a book” (97) and “I am behaving like a character in a book” (27). Of course, “FM” is a character in a book, Coetzee’s novel. Anyone who has read much about Fyodor Dostoevsky’s life realizes that he himself often behaved like a character in one of his own melodramatic novels. Of all the writers in the grand pantheon of Russian literature, Dostoevsky is the one, in fact, whose life is most novelistic.

Most writers don’t do much in life except write—writing is their life. Not Dostoevsky. Almost killed in a mock execution, sent to Siberia as a convict in a penal colony, released from prison but forced to live on in Semipalatinsk (Central Asia), where he engaged in a wild threesome of a love affair that ended when he married his first wife, a hysterical woman right out of one of his novels—and mother of Pavel Isaev, the stepson who shows up transfigured in Coetzee’s novel.

Almost immediately after his first marriage Dostoevsky treated his wife to a full-blown epileptic fit, complete with convulsions on the ground and foaming at the mouth. She had not even known in advance that he was epileptic. The same thing would happen after his second marriage. We could go on and on with this. Addiction to gambling. More crazy scenes. Epilepsy. Poverty. Suffice it to say that the life of Dostoevsky was a huge, sprawling melodramatic novel. But throughout it all FM always maintained somewhere deep inside himself a bedrock of sanity and strength.

Is the “FM” we meet in Coetzee’s novel that same man? Well, yes and no. Coetzee presents an “FM” who in many respects resembles FM. He throws in a few winks at the reader, allusions to the real Dostoevsky’s fictions and characters. AS mentions that she has his first novel, Poor Folk. “It was one of my husband’s favourites.” Nechaev has read Crime and Punishment. “It was that that gave me the idea.” There are at least two allusions to scenes from C and P. In the first of these “FM” goes to the police station, where he thinks “surely he has been here before, in this very ante-room or one like it, and had an attack or a fainting fit! But why is it that he recollects the episode only so dimly? And what has the recollection to do with the smell of fresh paint?”

Not the author, but his character, the unhinged Raskolnikov from C and P has been here before, and he had a fainting fit here. Also in the anteroom sits “a young man in stained housepainter’s overalls.” This alludes to the episode when Raskolnikov commits his murders. He barely avoids being seen by two young house painters at the scene of the crime. Later one of them convinces himself that he had been the murderer, and he goes to the police to confess. Later, when “FM” meets with Nechaev in a Petersburg hovel, Sonya the angelic prostitute from C and P shows up in the ghostly flesh, along with three starving children who are analogous to the Marmeladov children in that novel.

As mentioned above, Maria Lebyadkin and her brother Captain Lebyadkin, characters in FM’s Devils, also have cameo roles in The Master of St. Petersburg. In October and November of 1869, when the action is set, the real FM was back in Dresden, frenetically working on his Eternal Husband, in which one of the characters appears based on Pasha Isaev. AS alludes to this work when she tells “FM,” “You don’t want to become the eternal lodger, after all. Isn’t that the name of a book?” The plot of The Eternal Husband involves a cuckolded husband, whereas in Master the husband, not the wife, is the betrayer.

An interesting omission: there seems to be no mention of, or allusion to the big novel recently completed by Dostoevsky: The Idiot. This is probably because the major themes of the novel—depiction of an almost ideal, saintly man, and the hope for humanity in doctrines of Russian Orthodox Christianity are absent in Coetzee’s novel—which reeks of the perversity and pedophilia that he attributes to FM, but does not show any of FM’s positive side. In discussing Pavel’s diary and other papers, which “FM” has come to claim, the police inspector Maximov remarks as follows: “The prospect that after our decease a stranger will come sniffing through our possessions, opening drawers, breaking seals, reading intimate letters—such would be a painful prospect to any of us, I am sure.”

That, of course, is exactly what any biographer does, and it is what Coetzee has done to the real Fyodor Mikhailovich Dostoevsky. Does the dead author have any rights left? Unfortunately, not. The dead cannot sue you, no matter what you say about them. Does Coetzee, in distorting the real FM, have any compunctions about what he has done? Has he come to write his book in a spirit of frivolity, knowing little about his subject? Apparently not, since in one of his interviews on line Prof. Coetzee mentions teaching a course on Dostoevsky.

What has Coetzee taken away from the real FM in the way he presents the great writer? A lot. He takes away Dostoevsky’s fervent belief in an afterlife, FM’s almost fanatical insistence that the way of Christ would prevail in the end, and that even the whole world would eventually find redemption by embracing the Russian form of Christianity. About “FM”: “He expects to spend eternity on a river bank with armies of other dead souls, waiting for a barge that will never arrive.” True, Dostoevsky gave such dismal scenes of the afterlife to the imaginations of his most despicable characters—Svidrigailov, Stavrogin, old man Karamazov—but steadily resisted them himself.

Afflicted with epilepsy, as was his creator, Prince Myshkin of The Idiot “is overcome, at the onset of this disease, with the same ecstatic intuition of supernatural plenitude that his creator both cherished as a divine visitation and feared as the harbinger of madness” (Joseph Frank, Dostoevsky: The Miraculous Years, p. 316). Coetzee takes away from his “FM” the divine visitation of the aura, but leaves him with the horror and the harbinger of madness. Furthermore, the “FM” of this novel fears that if he begins writing vileness and obscenity will pour out of his soul onto the page. Indeed, at the end of the novel that is exactly what happens. But the real FM, meanwhile, is back in Dresden writing, not blocked, knowing that he, his wife and baby child can avoid starvation only if he can sell his writings. The real FM, back in Dresden, little resembles the madman “FM” of Master, who is weak and degenerate. The real FM, strong throughout it all, went through a life of unimaginable tribulations and never gave up. By age 60, when he died, he was exhausted. And who would not be, given what he had to live with?

The Master of Petersburg gives short shrift to a remarkable woman, Anna Grigorievna Snitkina-Dostoevskaya, who stuck with this difficult man for the duration, bearing him four children. She is almost as ghostly a presence in this book as is Pavel. There are now two Annas in “FM”’s life, and the writer often compares AS favorably to AG, who is “too young” for him. We are supposed to believe that FM had little regard for his young wife or newborn baby, that he could casually start an affair while abroad. Dostoevsky is also portrayed as a whoremonger. Did he actually visit prostitutes during his lifetime? Maybe so, but we have no evidence of this. “FM” is an unfaithful husband. Again, this is a figment of Coetzee’s imagination. No evidence. On his deathbed Dostoevsky said to AG, “Remember, Anna, I have always loved you passionately, and never betrayed you once, not even in thought.” Pasha Isaev also showed up at the deathbed scene in 1881; he was there hoping to scrounge what he could as inheritance.

“FM” had “a voluptuous urge to confess his infidelities to his wife.” Made up, based, apparently, on what we do know: how FM took voluptuous delight in groveling before AG after his gambling losses—something like the drunk Marmeladov in Crime and Punishment, who enjoys being beaten by his wife because he knows he deserves it. Coetzee invents child prostitutes, with whom “FM” has consorted, at home and abroad. Is this fair to the real FM? No. It is egregiously unfair.

Here is Dostoevsky in Dresden, describing his daily routine to his beloved niece Sofya Ivanova, whose family is depicted with affection in his Eternal Husband. His daughter Lyuba (Lyubochka) was exactly three months old on the day he wrote this letter: “I cannot tell you how much I love her . . . The little girl is healthy, precocious, she listens when I sing to her and laughs all the time; she is a quiet child, not capricious” (cited in Frank, The Miraculous Years, p. 371). Can you imagine the “FM” of Master writing such a letter? But along with almost everything else positive about Dostoevsky, his love for his children is taken away from him in Coetzee’s novel.

Worst of all is that Coetzee, in creating his portrayal of FM as child molester, pedophile, pervert, perpetuates the old canard that began with Nikolai Strakhov’s letter to Lev Tolstoy in 1883. Dostoevsky was long dead before the letter finally came to light; he was not there to defend himself. Strakhov, an old friend of the family, who often dined with the Dostoevskys, was dead by then as well (he died in 1896), but AG, who was furious over the canard in the letter, said she only wished she could get to him and slap his face.

In the letter Strakhov described Dostoevsky as a consistently unpleasant person, who, e.g., loved to bait waiters in German restaurants. Then he went on to report that he had once been told that FM “had boasted of having . . . a little girl in a bathhouse, delivered over to him by her governess.” The original source for the story, Viskovatov, claiming to have heard it from FM’s mouth, is highly unreliable—he was not a close friend of FM, and the latter spoke of him with casual irony. No fair-minded critic these days gives the tale any credence.

Okay, I’ll concede that Fyodor Dostoevsky must have been a difficult man. He was afflicted with nervous illnesses and epilepsy most of his life. Highly irritable, opinionated, xenophobic, anti-Semitic. Certainly he wrote so much sickness into his fictions because he had a keen sense of sickness within himself. Meet him on the street and no way you’ll take him for Mother Teresa. But to make him into a pedophile. That’s simply unfair. Notwithstanding that, like any piece of juicy gossip, the Strakhov story refuses to die. What an unfortunate thing that Coetzee has chosen, apparently, to believe this nonsense and has made it the basis for his depiction of FM in such unflattering terms.

In today’s atmosphere of political correctness taken to extremes, of eager accusers and “cancel culture,” plenty of people will be all too ready to accept Coetzee’s negative portrayal of a great writer. After all, “if you write about one, then you must be one.” These days you are guilty of pedophilia until proven innocent. Already there have been calls for the head of Vladimir Nabokov, who took up Dostoevsky’s theme of pedophilia in Lolita and other works of fiction. Nabokov is also dead and unable to defend himself. And what about Coetzee as well? Could not the self-appointed arbiters of proper speech and thought—using the (il)logic of their pinbrains—assail him as well? Here’s a writer, they may say, who finds the subject of pedophilia too interesting by half. “If he writes about pedophilia, is he not immediately suspect of engaging in pedophilia?”

One positive thing: the kind of leftwing new fascism embodied in such movements to suppress free speech and thought (“cancel culture”)—as well as the unhealthy mania for the subject of pedophilia that flourishes in the U.S.—are so far largely absent in Russia. Which means that the year 2021, the two-hundredth anniversary of Fyodor Dostoevsky’s birth, can be celebrated with enthusiasm in his homeland.

 

 



Friday, January 10, 2020

Book Review Article, Ian McEwan, "NUTSHELL"





Book Review Article

Ian McEwan, Nutshell, Random House, 2016 (Anchor Books paperback, 2017), 197 pp.

“Freud’s repressed realm of bitter little embryos, spying from their natural nooks, upon the love life of their parents.” Vladimir Nabokov, Speak, Memory

There’s the epigraph to my article, and maybe the spark that later ignited in Ian McEwan’s brain; here’s the epigraph (from Hamlet) to Nutshell: “Oh, God, I could be bounded in a nutshell and count myself a king of infinite space—were it not that I have bad dreams.”

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A Teller of the Tale, Who Is Striving To Be

McEwan specializes in great beginnings and great endings to his fictions. Who has ever written a better bravura opening to a novel: “So here I am, upside down in a woman. Arms patiently crossed, waiting, waiting and wondering who I’m in, what I’m in for. My eyes close nostalgically when I remember how I once drifted in my translucent body bag, floated dreamily in the bubble of my thoughts through my private ocean in slow-motion somersaults, colliding gently against the transparent bounds of my confinement, the confiding membrane that vibrated with, even as muffled, the voices of conspirators in a vile enterprise. That was in my careless youth. Now, fully inverted, not an inch of space to myself, knees crammed against my belly, my thoughts as well as my head are fully engaged. I’ve no choice, my ear is pressed all day and night against the bloody walls. I listen, make mental notes, and I’m troubled. I’m hearing pillow talk of deadly intent and I’m terrified by what awaits me, by what might draw me in.”

Okay, so we have a fetus narrating the story, and this is a fully conscious and articulate fetus, one, furthermore, who has vast knowledge of the world out there before he—if he is a ‘he’—is even in it. His many observations on the twenty-first century realm awaiting his entry are astute, perspicacious, worthy of his creator—who, obviously, has lent his narrator his own perspicacity, education, wit, vocabulary. The fetus is unnamed. For purposes of this review we can call him FN (fetus narrator). FN is very close to full term, about to be born, almost a babe in arms. His parents, father, mother, stepfather (uncle) have apparently given no consideration to what “it” (they call him “it”) will be called.

The main protagonists already in earthly life are pregnant Trudy Cairncross, her husband John Cairncross, and his brother Claude Cairncross. As FN sees the situation, “My mother has preferred my father’s brother, cheated her husband, ruined her son. My uncle has stolen his brother’s wife, deceived his nephew’s father, grossly insulted his sister-in-law’s son.” Since the whole novel takes off on the intrigue of Hamlet, Trudy and Claude are pale stand-ins for royalty, the original Gertrude and Claudius. Twenty-eight-year-old Trudy has good looks, but apparently not much of anything else. She is a strangely blank character. If she has an education or profession it is never mentioned. The action takes place in London, 2015, but none of the characters appear to use social media. No Facebook, no Twitter, not even e-mail. Odd. Is the whole weirdly anachronistic story only a bad dream (see Hamlet epitaph above) in the brain of a fetus who has just read Hamlet and Macbeth? Or in the brain of a writer named McEwan? Food for thought.

Claude is a dull man who has prospered financially in property development. He has always envied his older brother John—not a king, but a poet—whose accomplishments from early youth have left poor Claude perpetually in the shadows. Now Claude has made a lot more money than John, who teaches poetry, writes his own verse, and runs a modest publishing house. We get mixed messages on how good a poet John really is, but no matter to Claude, who can’t get over his envy. Basically, Nutshell rehashes the plot of Hamlet from a new angle: what if the mother’s and uncle’s adultery had begun while Hamlet was still in the womb? And what if Hamlet were already conscious in utero and could spy on Gertrude and Claudius as they plot the murder of his father? And then desperately wrack his uterine mind for a way to prevent it.

Why Do I Have To Be Born? But I Want To Be Born

FN’s other, more personal problem is ontological. “My idea was To be. Or if not that, its grammatical variant, is. This was my aboriginal notion and here’s the crux—is. Just that. In the spirit of Es muss sein. The beginning of conscious life was the end of illusion, the illusion of non-being, and the eruption of the real. The triumph of realism over magic, of is over seems. My mother is involved in a plot, and therefore I am too, even if my role might be to foil it. Or if I, reluctant fool, come to term too late, then to avenge it.” This passage about hoping to be shows up early, on p. 3, and here, as well as throughout the rest of the novel, FN comments on the state of the world he hopes to join.

Sometimes he is optimistic: “I’ll inherit a condition of modernity (hygiene, holidays, anaesthetics, reading lamps, oranges in winter) and inhabit a privileged corner of the planet—well-fed, plague-free Western Europe.” Sometimes pessimistic: “will [the earth’s] nine billion heroes scrape through without a nuclear exchange? Think of it as a contact sport. Line up the teams. India versus Pakistan, Iran versus Saudi Arabia, Israel versus Iran, USA versus China, Russia versus USA and NATO, North Korea versus the rest.”

Whether hopeful or not, FN insists of having his chance to exist: “Give me my go, my afterlife, paradise on earth, even a hell, a thirteenth floor [in an orphanage where he fears he will end up]. I can take it. I believe in life after birth . . . . Three score and ten? Wrap them up, I’ll take them.”

In his view the book of the twentieth century is “a grim read, at least until halfway.” Hopeful FN looks forward to reading some day, My History of the 21st Century, which will conclude with a passage featuring his eighty-year-old self, dancing a jig on Dec. 31, 2099. Es muss sein, it must be so, or at least he hopes so. Part of the fun of the book is the way a fetus has knowledge of a passage from Beethoven’s compositions—or has he read Milan Kundera’s The Unbearable Lightness of Being, which features the same German phrase? He also cites passages in French, or Latin, such as sunt lacrimae rerum, which, so the Internet tells me, comes from the writings of the Roman poet Virgil, 1st Century BC: “There are tears in things [life is tragic], and mortality teaches the mind.” FN appears as well to have read, enjoyed James Joyce’s Ulysses, citing one passage, “He kills his mother but he can’t wear grey trousers.” Then again, Trudy and Claude, stressed out by their murderous plotting, drink wine incessantly, and FN has already developed a taste for fine wine, “decanted through a healthy placenta.” FN the narrator is drunk, or at least half drunk, throughout half or more of the action.

In his strivings to emerge into being FN faces one enormous obstacle: nobody wants him. Not only has no one bothered about considering names for the about-to-be child. No one appears, as well, to have done the normal tests that precede practically any birth in modern civilized London. They could have determined the sex of the fetus by using genetic testing, ultrasound, Ramzi’s Method, etc. No mention is made of any of these tests. What about amniocentesis? Nope. They apparently don’t know if the child will be a boy or girl; furthermore, they do not care. In one respect this is the strangest book imaginable featuring a mother about to give birth for the first time. Why? Because Trudy, the mother, appears to have few or no maternal instincts. She is so entangled in a murder plot, conniving with her brother-in-law/lover, to murder her husband—and inherit the old family manse, now worth millions—that the fact of the soon-to-arrive bundle of joy is totally eclipsed.

Mother love and love of son. Most men have mother problems only after they are born—take Elvis, for example, or Norman Bates. FN’s mother issues get a head start; they begin in the womb. Already FN loves his mother, although he knows her “only from the inside.” Does she love him? He has his doubts. For one thing, throughout the course of the action she indulges herself in alcohol to relieve nervous tension. This shows scant consideration for the near-term baby in her womb. In addition, FN has heard unsettling things in the podcasts he listens to through the uterine walls. “My affair with Trudy isn’t going well. I thought I could take her love for granted. But I’ve heard biologists debating at dawn. Pregnant mothers must fight the tenants of their wombs. Nature, a mother herself, ordains a struggle for resources that may be needed to nurture my future sibling rivals . . . The biologists also suggest that my father’s wisest move is to trick another man into raising his child while he—my father!—distributes his likeness among other women. So bleak, so loveless.”

What about Uncle Claude? Does he give a fig for the child about to arrive? No. Not a fig. He assumes that after the birth the creature will be disposed of as soon as possible, “placed somewhere.” Claude is the enemy. “He’ll crush me. Unless, unless, unless—a wisp of a word, ghostly token of altered fate, bleating little iamb of hope, it drifts across my thoughts like a floater in the vitreous humour of an eye.”

The original Hamlet is tormented by visions of adultery between his mother and uncle, but poor FN, rightful son and heir, is forced to tolerate the actual adultery pounding against his head. “Not everyone knows what it is to have your father’s rival’s penis inches from your nose. By this late stage they should be refraining on my behalf. Courtesy, if not clinical judgment, demands it. I close my eyes. I grit my gums. I brace myself against the uterine walls. This turbulence would shake the wings off a Boeing. My mother goads her lover, whips him on with her fairground shrieks. Wall of Death! On each occasion, on every piston stroke, I dread that he’ll break through and shaft my soft-boned skull and seed my thoughts with his essence, with the teeming cream of his banality. Then, brain-damaged, I’ll think and speak like him. I’ll be the son of Claude.”

Hilarious stuff, this passage, and equally as funny and entertaining is the scene describing how FN, once again weathering the assault of Claude in missionary position, makes an unsuccessful attempt at suicide by strangling himself with the umbilical cord.

But surely John Cairncross, poet and thinker, owner of “an impoverished publishing house,” genuine father of the fetus inside Trudy, will stand up for his unborn son. No. This becomes clear in the scene when John appears at his former home and lays out all his cards for the lovers, his wife and brother. In planning for his future with the owl poet Elodie, in magnanimously conceding Trudy’s future with Claude, John has not one word to say on the fate of the child about to be born. “What was I in my father’s peroration? Dead. Head-first in a burial mound within his hated ex-wife’s gut. Not even a mention, not in an aside, not even dismissed as an irrelevance . . . In a rush towards his own rebirth, he discarded mine. Fathers and sons. I heard it once and won’t forget. What binds them in nature? An instant of blind rut.”

At this point unwanted FN lapses into despair. He can see no way to save his father. If his mother and uncle are implicated in the murder he’ll end up in prison; if not, he’ll end up in an orphanage. “To start life in a cell, bliss unknown, boredom a fought-for privilege. And if they succeed—then it’s the Vale of Swat. I see no scheme, no plausible route to any conceivable happiness. I wish never to be born . . .”

Late in the novel, when the police come to question Claude and Trudy about the murder, they do not even bother asking the questions almost obligatory in the face of a pregnant woman: Boy or girl? When’s he due? Nobody cares.

Who and What Am I? Whose Am I? More Ontological Uncertainty

All of the major characters seem to take for granted that FN is the natural son of John Cairncross. The very narration of the book makes that assumption. But there is a certain vagueness in the text. When exactly did the affair between Trudy and Claude begin? If that is specified in the novel I missed it. How can everyone be so sure that FN is not the offspring of illicit seed? Although FN himself never entertains such dismal thoughts, there are hints at several points: “My uncle—a quarter of my genome, of my father’s a half, but no more like my father than I to Virgil or Montaigne. What despicable part of myself is Claude and how will I know? I could be my own brother and deceive myself as he deceived his.” On the issue of whose, in the final pages of the book, when Trudy tells Claude he must aid her with the midwifery, he answers, “Not my baby,” but then again, what does he know? he who is portrayed throughout the text as a dunce. Is John Cairncross’ indifference toward his future son a hint that he, too, suspects that the child is Claude’s? Hmm.

What about the gender of the fetus FN? A passage at the beginning of Ch. 15 apparently offers proof that FN is a male: “Early in my conscious life one of my fingers, not then subject to my influence, brushed past a shrimp-like protuberance between my legs.” This passage goes on to discuss what is called “a diverting issue in neuroscience known as the binding problem,” then arrives at a conclusion that leaves FN disillusioned: “No one exclaims at the moment of one’s dazzling coming-out, It’s a person! Instead: It’s a girl. It’s a boy. Pink or blue—a minimal improvement on Henry Ford’s offer of cars of any colour so long as they were black. Only two sexes. I was disappointed. If human bodies, minds, fates are so complex, if we are free like no other mammal, why limit the range?”

Throughout the novel the narrator, as well as his parents, apparently see FN as a male, his parents’ son, but once again, despite the single mention of the shrimp-like organ, room is left for doubt. As mentioned above, Trudy apparently has never gone through the normal prenatal care that would include tests establishing the sex. She, as well as all the others, speak of FN as “it.” 

Ian McEwan once got in trouble for declaring publicly that most men born with a dick are males. FN’s plea for “It’s a person” is then, perhaps, McEwan’s concession to modern proponents of genderlessness: none of us is either here nor there; we’re all somewhere in between. But as if resisting recruitment into the shibboleths of modern times, the author, only a page later, has his fetus narrator lash out against modern youth, with its “new dispensation in the matter of blue and pink. Be careful what you wish for. Here’s a new politics in university life . . . A strange mood has seized the almost-educated young. They’re on the march, angry at times, but mostly needful, longing for authority’s blessing, its validation of their chosen identities. The decline of the West in new guise perhaps. Or the exaltation and liberation of the self. A social-media site famously proposes seventy-one gender options—neutrois, two spirit, bigender . . . any colour you like, Mr. Ford. Biology is not destiny after all, and there’s cause for celebration . . . Should inconvenient opinions hover near me like fallen angels or evil djinn (a mile being too near), I’ll be in need of the special campus safe room equipped with Play-Doh and looped footage of gamboling puppies. Ah, the intellectual life! I may need advance warning if upsetting books or ideas threaten my very being by coming too close, breathing on my face, my brain, like unwholesome dogs.”

The rant about modern coddled youth goes on for two solid pages. “Something too much of this,” as Hamlet would say, but maybe one purpose of this long digression is to throw up a smokescreen around a prominent issue: Is FN a boy, or a girl, or even neither fish nor fowl? “Wait, wait,” screams the impatient reader of this review. “FN is a boy, and you’re talking nonsense. The evidence of the shrimp cannot be ignored. For all that, there’s an easy way to settle this. After all, the book ends with FN’s birth, his emergence into the air of the novel on this side of the womb, where we can take a good look between his/her legs to see if she/he has a wiener. These days maybe that is not definitive proof, but it’s good enough for me. Re-read carefully the last few pages of the book, p.192-97.”

I just did. In giving Claude instructions about how to help her with the birth, Trudy still uses the word “it.” “When it comes out it’ll be face down. You’ll pick it up, both hands, very gently, supporting the head, and place it on me . . . . Don’t worry about the cord. It’ll stop beating on its own and the baby will start to breathe. You’ll put a couple of towels over it to keep it warm.” In the throes of being born, FN still manages a flash of resentment: “I listen closely, intent on learning what to do. Duck under a towel. Breathe. Don’t say a word. But it! Surely, pink or blue!”

Right after the birth: “I’m breathing. Delicious. My advice to newborns: don’t cry, look around, taste the air. I’m in London. The air is good.” But nobody says, It’s a boy, or It’s a girl, or It’s a person. Nobody bothers to look in between the legs of newborn FN; therefore, we, the readers, are left not knowing for sure either. Are we as readers prisoners of our own easy assumptions? Do all babies with penises have to be males? Are we “woodcocks to our own springes”? Or McEwan’s springes? Maybe.

The Fetus As Writer

Probably the most amazing thing about FN is that he, a fetus, is already an accomplished writer of skilled narrative fiction. His vocabulary includes words such as “purulent,” and he has knowledge of rhetorical devices—e.g., the word aporia, “a professing, or matter about which one professes, to be at a loss what course to pursue, where to begin, what to say.” His story advances, as does a good work of fiction, with some vital information withheld from the reader, with certain hints of what is to come, foreshadowing. For example, mention is made of smoothies early on; only later do we learn that John Cairncross’ favorite smoothie is the Tropical Dawn (bananas, pineapple, apple, mint, wheat germ), purchased from the store called, with cruel irony, Smoothie Heaven. The conspirators mix it with antifreeze and use this concoction to poison John. The “owl poet,” apparently John’s mistress, is alluded to several times; she steps into the narrative as a central character only in Chapter Seven.

On p. 97 budding author FN declares, “I might try my hand at a monograph.” Here are his musing about murder mysteries, which Nutshell parodies throughout: “This is how it is, how stories work, when we know of murders from their inception. We can’t help siding with the perpetrators and their schemes, we wave from the quayside as their little ship of bad intent departs. Bon voyage! It’s not easy, it’s an achievement, to kill someone and go free. The datum of success is ‘the perfect murder.’ And perfection is hardly human. On board, things will go wrong, someone will trip on an uncoiled rope, the vessel will drift too far west of south. Hard work, and all at sea.”

Sometimes, as a way of consoling himself or escaping dire reality, FN creates totally imaginary scenes. Aware that Uncle Claude has gone to the office of John Cairncross, to offer him money—this is in Ch. 4—FN imagines their encounter: “to divert myself I send my thoughts ahead to spy on them. Purely an exercise of the imagination. Nothing here is real.” What follows is a fictional scene (within a fiction) of two pages, describing the interaction of the brothers, how John refuses the loan, how John reads from a poem about an owl by Elodie, how John manifests the same casual disdain for his younger brother that has been consistent since their early childhood together.

Although the scene is totally invented, it is of a piece with the rest of the story. It manages some more foreshadowing, of Elodie’s role later on. “Blood-wise fatal bellman,” quotes fictitious John from her fictitious poem—taking off on a line from Macbeth: “It was the owl that shriek’d, the fatal bellman”—and that bellwoman is what Elodie is later to be, instrumental in befuddling the murderers and turning the police against them. Elodie is a conundrum, the most complex character in the book—“this is a complicated young woman,” says the police inspector—a melody with the first letter, M for Murder, missing. Accidentally, or with snide purpose, Trudy once refers to her as “Threnody.” She, Trudy, probably is unaware of the meaning of the word, but John enlightens her. A threnody is a funereal dirge, playing later in the background score—in the film of Nutshell that will soon be made—as the murderous couple, aware they are about to be arrested, make frantic plans to escape England for some country without an extradition treaty.

After making up this scene, FN imagines the possible benefits of being a writer of fiction: “I escaped over the wire without ladder or rope, free as a bird, leaving behind my now and my here. My limiting truth was untrue: I can be gone any time I like, throw Claude out of the house, visit my father in his office, be a loving, invisible snooper. Are movies as good as this? I’ll find out. One could make a living devising such excursions. But the actual, the circumscribed real, is absorbing too and I’m impatient for Claude to return and tell us what really happened. My version is certain to be wrong.”

FN is right; his version is wrong—his father took the loan—but despite the inaccuracy of the invented scene, it fits well into the tenor of the tale as a whole. Much later in the book (Ch. 20), FN takes refuge in another fictional scene. “I’m asking myself, what is it that I most want now. Anything I want. Realism not a limiting factor. Cut the ropes, set the mind free. I can answer without thinking—I’m going through the main gate.” What follows is a conscious, or subconscious parody of the ghost scene near the beginning of Hamlet. For two pages the fiction writer FN conjures his father back from the grave and has his father’s gruesome corpse, still showing signs of the poisoning—confront the murderers.

There are numerous other examples of how FN makes things up as he writes. At Elodie’s first appearance in the book, he cannot, of course see what she looks like, how she is dressed, so he turns to his imagination for help: “By nocturnal association I dress her in tight-fitting black leather jacket and jeans, let her be young, pale, pretty, her own woman.” Only after he is born, in the final pages of the book, when he lays eyes on the murderous couple for the first time, does FN edit his descriptions of Uncle Claude—“Smaller than I cast him, with narrow shoulders and a foxy look”—and his mother—“hair darker than I thought, the eyes a paler green.” 

As FN speculates in one philosophical digression, a true artist does not need much space to work in; a true artist can shun the macrocosms and concentrate on microcosms: “To be bound in a nutshell, see the world in two inches of ivory, in a grain of sand. Why not, when all of literature, all of art, of human endeavour, is just a speck in the universe of possible things. And even this universe may be a speck in a multitude of actual and possible universes.”
One more thing about FN’s imaginative cast of mind, how he is a consummate creative writer before he is even born. He identifies with John Cairncross, his father, he exults in the poetry his father loves to quote, and his artistic vibes are constantly under assault by the unimaginative, third-rate nature of Uncle Claude’s speech and thought.

Hamlet and Macbeth

Has FN read Shakespeare? He must have, since he knows lines from Hamlet and Macbeth, cites them or plays with them, adapting them to his own narrative. The plotline of Nutshell is something of a retelling, recasting of the Hamlet plot, but sometimes it seems to have more in common with Macbeth. McEwan is subtle in his use of allusions, sometimes letting a scene tiptoe around the original text from Shakespeare, never quite coming into contact with it. Such is the scene in Ch. 20, when FN conjures up the appearance of his father’s ghost. This ghost scene with dead father—so it turns out—has little in common with the one in Hamlet. Here John Cairncross returns to murder his perfidious brother, then kisses his wife Trudy “long and hard, with icy putrefying lips.”

Most often the connection with Shakespeare is made through tiny bits and pieces, fragments of quotations that say to the reader, “See, look. Here’s Hamlet again; or Macbeth. This begins as early as the second page of the book: “I count myself an innocent, but it seems I’m party to a plot. My mother, bless her unceasing, loudly squelching heart, seems to be involved. Seems, mother? No, it is” [my emphasis, URB]. You are. You are involved.” Hamlet, 1.2:76. “Seems, madam? Nay, it is. I know not ‘seems.’”

More examples, first from Macbeth: (1) Nutshell, first chapter: “they’re planning a dreadful event. Should it go wrong, I’ve heard them say, their lives will be ruined. They believe that if they’re to proceed, they should act quickly and soon.” Lady Macbeth, I.7: “If it were done when ‘tis done then ‘twere well it were done quickly.” (2) Inarticulate Claude, unaware, surely, that it’s Lady Macbeth he’s trying to quote: “We’ll stick our courage to the screwing whatever” (Ch. 13). Lady Macbeth, 1.7: “But screw your courage to the sticking-place, and we’ll not fail.” (3) See above, the passage about the owl as fatal bellman. Macbeth, 2.2:5-6.

Then from Hamlet: (1) Claude and Trudy. “Sometimes he’ll call her his mouse” (Ch. 3); “Yes, I was there when he tempted her again to bed, called her his mouse, pinched her nipples hard, filled her cheeks with his lying breath and cliché-bloated tongue” (Ch. 16). Hamlet, 3.4: 182-84: “Not this, by no means, that I bid you do: Let the bloat King tempt you again to bed, Pinch wanton on your cheek, call you his mouse,” (2) “My uncle—a quarter of my genome, of my father’s a half, but no more like my father than I to Virgil or Montaigne” (Ch. 4); Hamlet, 1.2, 151-54: “my uncle, my father’s brother, but no more like my father than I to Hercules.” (3) Claude: “What’s it to. Erm. Be?” (Ch. 4). To be or not to. (4) After FN gives Trudy hard kicks with his heels, “’Oh, oh, little mole,’ my mother calls out in a sweet, maternal voice. ‘He’s waking up’” (Ch. 10); Hamlet, 1.5, while Hamlet is trying to get Horatio and Marcellus to swear they will say nothing about the appearance of the ghost of Hamlet’s father, the ghost fulminates beneath the scene, repeating the word, “Swear,” and “Swear by his sword.” In his new, jokey mode, Hamlet replies, “Well said, old mole!”

(5) Here’s a long passage (beginning of Ch. 10) that veers in and out of a mix of Hamlet’s dialogue at its most gloomy: “There was a time when Claude’s exit line might have made me smile. But lately, don’t ask why, I’ve no taste for comedy, no inclination to exercise, even if I had the space, no delight in fire or earth, in words that once revealed a golden world of majestical stars, the beauty of poetic apprehension, the infinite joy of reason. These admirable radio talks and bulletins, the excellent podcasts that moved me, seem at best hot air, at worst a vaporous stench. The brave polity I’m soon to join, the noble congregation of humanity, its customs, gods and angels, its fiery ideas and brilliant ferment, no longer thrill me. A weight bears down heavily on the canopy that wraps my little frame. There’s hardly enough of me to form one small animal, still less to express a man. My disposition is to stillborn sterility, then to dust.”

Compare Hamlet, his first soliloquy, 1.2: “How weary, stale, flat, and unprofitable seem to me all the uses of this world;” his speech to Rosencrantz and Guildenstern, 2.2: “indeed, it goes so heavily with my disposition that this goodly frame, the earth, seems to me a sterile promontory; this most excellent canopy, the air, look you, this brave o’erhanging firmament; this majestical roof fretted with golden fire; why it appeareth nothing to me but a foul and pestilent congregation of vapors.”

(6) In the last act of Shakespeare’s play Hamlet dies and “The rest is silence” (his final words). FN is born into his fretful world just moments before his mother is to be arrested for murder, and “the rest is chaos” (the final line in Nutshell).

I wonder how many other allusions to Shakespeare in Nutshell that I have missed. Here’s one to King Lear: “Why would the world configure itself so harshly? Among much else, people are sociable and kind. Ripeness isn’t everything” (Ch. 4). King Lear: “Men must endure their going hence, even as their coming hither: ripeness is all.”

The Murder Plot and The Parody of a Murder Mystery

Nutshell involves a pale refraction of the Hamlet plot wrapped up in the parody of a murder mystery. As we know from reading the genre of the murder mystery novel, imperfect people are always perpetrating the “perfect crime.” Note to potential murderers: when preparing all the “evidence” to be left behind for police and forensics experts at the scene of the crime—items that will “prove” the fact of suicide—at least one of the items will end up igniting like a bomb, blowing up your whole carefully plotted scheme and implicating you in the murder. In Nutshell the bomb that goes off is in the planted gloves of the murdered man.

While the insensitive murderers celebrate their victory with an act of sexual intercourse, disdaining the danger to a fetus almost at full term, their fate is already sealed. Elodie the owl poet has something to do with this, although we never learn exactly how she has proceeded and what she has said to direct the police toward the culprits.

In murder mysteries and Hollywood films, killers behave in ways that killers in life seldom do. On the very day after their crime they are shown blithely skipping along down the street, whistling “Dixie” off tune, as if murder had no private psychological consequences. Since McEwan, however, writes literary fiction, he is careful to give us an example of how things really work. At one point John Cairncross appears about to leave the kitchen, where the conspirators have prepared a drink laced with poison for him. Trudy’s loving performance at that critical moment, her recollection for her husband of the good times they once shared, persuades him to drink the fatal toast.

Her treacherous behavior here is truly worthy of her mentor, Lady Macbeth, but after the deed is done she collapses into a remorseful funk. Did I just do that? Could I have done such a thing? No. I want a chance to make the choice again; this time I won’t kill my husband John. What’s to make of all this? Well, for one thing, her behavior rings true; the literary artist McEwan has delved deeply into at least one possible, if incongruous reaction to murder. People are complicated, and, as FN writes, “However close you get to others, you can never get inside them, even when you’re inside them.”

Of course, in the Hamlet plot both Gertrude and Claudius are wracked by guilt and remorse. So too are both Macbeths. In Nutshell Trudy is the remorseful one, while Claude’s stupidity and solipsism shields him: “Claude, unlike Trudy, owns his crime. This is a Renaissance man, a Machiavel, an old school villain, who believes he can get away with murder. The world doesn’t come to him through a haze of the subjective; it comes refracted by stupidity and greed, bent as through a glass of water, but etched on a screen before the inner eye, a lie as sharp and bright as truth. Claude doesn’t know he’s stupid. If you’re stupid, how can you tell?”

The author is also particularly good in describing how Trudy deals with her remorse, how she finds ways to rationalize her way out of guilt: “Her status as a murderer is a fact, an item in the world outside herself. But that’s old thinking. She affirms, she identifies as innocent. Even as she strains to clean up traces in the kitchen, she feels blameless and therefore is—almost. Her grief, her tears, are proof of probity. She’s beginning to convince herself with her story of [John’s] depression and suicide. She can almost believe the sham evidence in the car. Only persuade herself and she’ll deceive with ease and consistency. Lies will be her truth” (Ch. 15).

This line is reinforced three chapters later, when Trudy works on the fiction she has concocted for the police: “She’s memorizing her memories. The transcription errors will be in her favor. They’ll be a helpful cushion at first, on their way to becoming the truth. She could also tell herself—she didn’t buy the glycol, go to Judd Street, mix the drinks, plant stuff in the car, dump the blender. She cleaned up the kitchen—not against the law. Convinced, she’ll be liberated from conscious guile and may stand a chance. The effective lie, like the masterly golf swing, is free of self-awareness” (Ch. 18).

So it goes something like this: Did I kill somebody? No. That was somebody else who did that. I could never have done such a thing. I feel sorry, so sorry for the murder victim. He/she did not deserve such a fate, but I’m not to blame, etc., etc. You keep this inner monologue going long enough and you really come to believe it. Now we can understand you, O.J. We comprehend how you could say, “Every morning when I’m shaving I look in the mirror and say to myself, ‘Whoever killed Nicole is still out there, still at large; we’ve got to find that bastard, bring him to justice.’”
The Play’s The Thing

When I was a professor of Russian literature I would sometimes pause in the middle of a class, smile beatifically, and announce to the students in front of me: “Can there be anything better in the whole wide world than reading Russian literature?” The puzzled mouths of my students would gape in astonishment; they didn’t get it. Most of them, in fact, had never learned to read literary fiction; it takes practice and deep application of your deepest creative neurons. What I meant was the pure aesthetic pleasure derived from reading great works of art.

What is literary fiction for? To teach us more about how the world works, how human psychology operates? Maybe. To enlighten us, make us better persons, more moral? I doubt it. Literary fiction might sometimes even inspire immorality. Is it about “getting” the message of the book? Tolstoy’s Anna Karenina: “Adultery doesn’t pay.” Ah, now I understand. Or finding the “symbols”: this symbolizes that, and that this. Now I get it. No, you don’t. The greatest reason for reading great literary fiction lies in the pleasure. The joy in the act of reading.
Nutshell is a small package of pure pleasure. 

You mount up on McEwan’s pony, sit behind him in the saddle and gallop along with him. He’s enjoying the ride, immensely; so are you. What incredible play of the artistic imagination! How it feels to be a fetus, as told by an incredibly well-educated and erudite fetus. What’s it like to be in a womb, in a woman, upside down? The examples are rife: getting drunk on fine French wine that permeates the placenta, taking a shower (“the thrumming warmth of speeding droplets”), sunbathing (“a penumbral coral glow, a prolonged tropical dusk, dully illuminates my inland sea and its trillion drifting fragments”), being assaulted by an alien phallus that pounds on your head, and, of course, being born, that terrifying experience that we all forget. Or do we totally?

Certainly dour, serious-minded readers—the risible impaired—will object to some scenes on grounds of scientific accuracy. Can a fetus talk? Duh. Can a fetus use a fingernail to rip a hole in the placenta, thereby instigating the breaking of the waters, the beginning of contractions; in a word, his own birth? Who cares? It’s funny.

Fellatio: “What she swallows will find its way to me as nutrient, and make me just a little like him.”

Uncle Claude’s snoring, as experienced from within: “On the exhalation, a long, constipated groan, its approaching terminus frilled with electric sibilants. Then an extended pause which, if you loved him, might alarm you. Has he breathed his last? If you don’t, there’s hope he has. But finally, a shorter, greedy intake, scarred with the rattle of wind-dried mucus and, at the breezy summit, the soft palate’s triumphant purr.”

I could go on and on with examples, but this book review is already far too long. Let’s end by quoting from an interview with Vladimir Nabokov: “All writers that are worth anything are humorists. I’m not P.G. Wodehouse. I’m not a funny man, but give me an example of a great writer who is not a humorist.”

I do not agree totally with that blanket statement. I can think of great writers who are not that much involved with humor. One of the greatest, Lev Tolstoy, is one of them. Certainly his writings have their share of comic incidences, but he’s not, primarily, a humorist. But then, if you like riding the romping and cavorting pony of aesthetic pleasure, what better than a comic novel? Gogol’s Dead Souls. Don DeLillo’s White Noise. Michael Frayn’s The Trick of It. Ian McEwan’s Nutshell. Don’t make the mistake of assuming that comic novels are to be disparaged as something inferior to the great serious novel. Great comic writing is always interlarded with the utterly serious, even profound.

One more speck of wisdom from Nabokov. He remarks somewhere that there are two supremely pleasurable things in life: collecting butterflies and writing creative fiction. Don’t know if Ian McEwan goes in for lepidopterology, but he sure can write literary fiction, and he surely is having a lot of fun doing it.