“Точность и
краткость есть первые достоинства прозы. Precision and brevity are the
primary virtues of prose.”
…Babel quoting Pushkin
“Никакое железо
не может войти в человеческое сердце так леденяще, как точка, поставленная
вовремя. No iron can stab the human heart with such chill as a period
placed just in time.”
…Probably the most famous line Babel ever wrote, from his
story, “Guy de Maupassant”
BAD NERVES, INSOMNIA, CAN’T WRITE
Letter written in Odessa, May 28, 1926: “Все было бы хорошо, если бы мне не
приходилось возить по всем городам глупые мои нервы, не умеющие работать и не
умеющие спать. Everything would be fine, if I were not obliged to
transport to all different cities my stupid nerves, which cannot work and
cannot sleep.” (there’s an echo of Gogol here)
ON WRITING NOVELS
“You know that I’ve never written any novels. I’ll tell you
frankly: my greatest desire in life is to write a novel. And many times I’ve
started doing it. Unfortunately, it never works out. What comes out is short.
Maybe for that reason I’m in awe of people who write novels. I write short
fiction. Such, it turns out, is my psychological mindset, such is the
configuration of my soul.” (from the reminiscences of G. Markov)
THE HARD WORK OF WRITING
“When I start working I always think that I’m not up to
doing it. Sometimes I weep out of sheer exhaustion . . . . If a certain
sentence won’t come out right I get palpitations of the heart. And so often it
is that they won’t come out right, the damned sentences.”
“I don’t have an imagination; I don’t know how to make
things up. I must know everything, down to the last minute detail; otherwise I
can’t write. The motto engraved on my shield is ‘authenticity.’ That’s why I
write so slowly and get very little written. It’s hard. After every story I age
several years.
Какое там к черту
моцартианство, веселье над рукописью и легкий бег воображения! Don’t
tell me this damn stuff about Mozart, about the joy of working on a manuscript
and the light flow of imagination!" (from the reminiscences of Konstantin
Paustovsky)
SEARCHING FOR THE SUN OF THE SOUTH
As early as 1915, barely having begun his career as a
writer, Babel, whose home town was Odessa, said that he was looking in
literature for the sun full of bright colors. He exulted in Gogol’s Ukrainian
stories and regretted how Petersburg had won out over Poltava. He strove for a
certain verve, splashes of brightness not typical of much Russian literature.
But by the beginning of the 1930s Babel was criticizing his earlier works for
what he saw as overdone stylistic effects. He stated that he wanted to write
more simply, to free himself from use of excessive imagery. Now he declared
that the Gogol of “The Overcoat” (a story set in St. Petersburg, the frigid
north) was dearer to him than the Gogol of the Ukrainian stories. But since he
published very little in the 1930s, the bulk of his fiction is still characterized
by the bright imagery of the south, of Odessa. (from the reminiscences of Ilya
Erenburg)
ON REWRITING
“First of all, I cut all the superfluous words out of the
sentence. You need a very sharp eye, because the language cleverly hides its
garbage, its repetitions, synonyms, its simply nonsensical stuff; the language
is all the time trying to outsmart you . . . . Each time I begin rewriting a
text I work until my most beastly caviling can no longer detect in the
manuscript a single grain of dirt.”
“I check the freshness and precision of all the images,
similes, metaphors. If your similes are not precise better to use none at all .
. . . a simile must be as exact as a slide rule and as natural as the smell of
dill.” (from the reminiscences of Paustovsky)
THE PERFECT WORD
"There are times when you've been agonizing over one page for a month or two and suddenly you find a certain word that leaves you in awe of your very self, how perfect it is! On such occasions I tear out of the house and go running through the streets, like the town crazy." (from the reminiscences of V. Fink)
ODESSA
"There are times when you've been agonizing over one page for a month or two and suddenly you find a certain word that leaves you in awe of your very self, how perfect it is! On such occasions I tear out of the house and go running through the streets, like the town crazy." (from the reminiscences of V. Fink)
ODESSA
What does Odessa have for a writer? “Lots of ocean [said
Babel], sun, beautiful women and lots of food for thought.” Babel loved all of
the above, plus horses. In mentioning a friend from his Red Cavalry days, a man
named Khlebnikov, Babel said that “Both of us looked at life as if looking at a
meadow in May, a meadow through which walked women and horses.”
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