Stalin Mugshot, 1911
(1891-1938)
Мы живем, под собою
не чуя страны,
Наши речи за десять
шагов не слышны,
А где хватит на полразговорца,
Там припомнят кремлёвского горца.
Его толстые пальцы, как черви, жирны,
А слова, как пудовые
гири, верны,
Тараканьи смеются усища,
И сияют его голенища.
А вокруг него сброд
тонкошеих вождей,
Он играет услугами
полулюдей.
Кто свистит, кто мяучит, кто хнычет,
Он один лишь бабачит и тычет,
Как подкову, кует за указом указ —
Кому в пах, кому в лоб, кому в бровь, кому в глаз.
Что ни казнь у него — то малина
И широкая грудь осетина.
1933 г.
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Literary
Translation/Adaptation by U.R. Bowie
Soso
Underfoot all’s a-tremble, for our
country’s gone blurred,
Ten steps from us none of our
words can be heard;
When we find enough speech to
converse, a half schmeer,
We mention the Kremlin’s renowned
mountaineer.
His fingers are fat, and like
worms, squirmy-greasy,
And his words are like true-blue
barbells from Tbilisi;
His handlebar cockroach-style
moustaches laughing,
And his boot tops are gleaming and
ever so dashing.
Around him swirl bureaucrats, vermin
thin-necked,
He plays with this half-human
sycophant sect.
One whistles, one meows, one
whimpers, one kids,
He alone clonks on noggins and jabs
hard at ribs.
One decree, then another, he
forges like horseshoes—
A groin-kick, eye-poke for you,
yours and youse—
Lopping off heads is just part of
the deal
For this broad-chested guy made of
Ossetian steel.
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Translator’s Note
The only surprising thing is that Mandelstam was not
arrested and executed as soon as the poem came to light. But Stalin himself—who
had a dark sense of humor—was rumored to have liked it. He allowed the poet to
go on living, in various places of exile, until 1938, when he was arrested and
died in a transit camp in Vladivostok, on his way to the Gulag.
Words Used and What
They Allude To (most info here is from Wikipedia)
Soso: the poem is not titled in the original; I have
given it this title in my translation. Soso was Stalin’s nickname in his
Georgian childhood. He originally was Ioseb [Joseph] (“Soso”) Jughashvilli
(sometimes spelled Dzhugashvilli). Stalin (“Man of Steel”) is a
nom de guerre, like Lenin, a revolutionary name.
First stanza: The mountaineer (горец) alludes to
Stalin’s origins in Georgia and the Caucasus Mountains.
Second stanza: “His fingers are fat . . .” In her
reminiscences Nadezhda Mandelstam describes how the poet Demyan Bednyj “was
careless enough to write in his diary that he did not like lending books to
Stalin, because the latter left on the white pages smudges from his greasy
fingers.”
Tbilisi: capital of Georgia, Stalin’s homeland, now
the independent Georgian Republic. The word is not in the original, but
presented itself as the perfect rhyme for greasy in my translation.
Third stanza: “clonks on noggins . . .” Reminiscences of
Stalin emphasize how he liked to play around with his confederates, leaders of
the Politburo. In meetings at his dacha he made them dance with one another. He
enjoyed humiliating them, bonking them on the head, pulling them by an ear, or
poking them in the ribs.
Fourth stanza: in this poem the word raspberries (малина)
has nothing to do with raspberries. I’ve looked at the some dozen translations of
this poem into English on the website ruverses.com, and it appears that
not a single translator figured this out. Most of them just ignore the word,
not knowing what the hell it’s doing there; a few make lame attempts to get
some raspberries into the translation.
Малина in the jargon of the criminal underworld means a scheme or
endeavor (“the job”—a caper, theft, robbery, or other criminal plan or act). E.g.,
“Он испортил всю малину” (literally, “He spoiled all
the raspberries”) means “He put the quietus on the whole deal.” See Kratkij
slovar’ sovremennogo russkogo zhargona (A Brief Lexicon of Modern Russian
Jargon), compiled by M.M. and B.P. Krestinsky (Posev: 1965), p. 16. The
next to last line in the poem means roughly that executions are part and parcel
of Stalin’s criminal machinations. Using a slang word current among criminals could
be an allusion to his revolutionary youth when he was known as Koba. Among
other felonious activities, he participated in kidnappings for ransom,
protection rackets, and robbing banks.
More on malina--note in a e-mail from Andrei Filippov, which I add below, with thanks to him:
Только что прочитал ваш перевод стихотворения О. Мандельштама с примечаниями. Позвольте небольшое уточнение. На фене, русском блатном жаргоне, слово "малина", насколько мне известно, означает место проживания или сбора группы, место хранения добычи и место проведения свободного времени. Это может быть дом, квартира, ресторан и т. д. То есть это географическая точка, а не сама группа. Я могу ошибаться, но за свои 60 с лишним лет я не встречал другого определения.
The gist in English: "as far as I know the word "malina" signifies the place where a criminal gang, lives, hangs out or keeps its booty. That can be a house, apartment, restaurant, etc. In other words, it's a geographical place, and the word does not refer to the gang itself. I may be mistaken, but . . . I've never heard another definition of the word.
Ossetian: Stalin was a Georgian, not an Ossetian, but his
hometown of Gori was located near Southern Ossetia.
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In the original variant of the poem the first stanza went
like this:
Мы живём, под
собою не чуя страны,
Наши речи за десять шагов не слышны,
Только слышно кремлёвского горца —
Душегубца и мужикоборца.
Literal translation:
We live, not sensing the country
beneath us,
What we say is not heard ten steps
away from us,
Only audible [are the words of]
the Kremlin mountaineer:
A murderer and oppressor of
peasants.
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